This post concerns Alan Hall’s essay “Cigarettes and Dance Ateps,” as presented in Reality Radio. What follows are the sections of his essay that prompted me to evaluate my own production.
Alan Hall in his essay, “Cigarettes and Dance Steps” discusses structuring his stories.
[music, "Dim Blue Voices," solo piano crossfades with jazz trio version]
WILL [voice-over]: When I came back, one of the first things I wanted to do obviously was to play some piano…Yeah, I’m gonna turn the air back on-it’s a bit hot…Alright, let’s go outside. I wanna smoke a cigarette.
[sound of lighter]
WILL: It was rough. It was rough, definitely, but I kinda liked the things I learned about myself…
…..
[sound of train]
[jazz trio crossfades with solo piano]
Above, is the transcription of a script that Alan Hall provided in the essay, where the sound effects support and punctuate the piece. This script reminds me of sound designs I created for college theater. In theater the words always come first, and you really have to think hard about whether what you’re adding to the piece supports those words or whether those words distract from the main thread unnecessarily. Because I haven’t been scripting, I haven’t been sound designing my scripts. I’ve been treating sound effects as “a thing I can use to make transitions less awkward.” This attitude is pragmatic, but not artful. I need to write scripts first and then treat them as I would a theatrical script and see what sounds and music I should add to support the emotional tone and environment of the piece. Previously, I’ve been inspired to produce ambiances and sound collages when I get an incredibly vivid mind picture while hearing someone speak and wanting to help support their words by expanding on them audibly. I think there will still be room to create these sound pictures, but I can make the experience of listening to a piece deeper and richer if I begin to focus clearly on sound designing the piece, rather than sound effecting the piece.
For the feature maker, sound – pure sound – is as potent a substance as any carefully weighted word or well-chosen musical figuration. Possibly even more potent. It should be used with care: no sound is innocent.
Choices matter. Everything I’m reading is saying the same thing. The choices you make matter, so do not treat them lightly. Do not make them at the end of the night when you just want a little shut eye, give them the time and reflection they deserve.
…Gunfire, like that in Will’s recordings, immediately lends a report weight and urgency, though soon the words of the reporter are likely to assume center stage. Further sound effects, if they do appear again, will function either as punctuation, dividing scenes and thoughts, or they will directly illustrate the story.
When I read Ira Glass’ essay, “Harnessing Luck as an Industrial Product,” I realized that I do not have enough field ambiances and enough things that place the listener in the scene. Ira Glass told me what I needed to find, Alan Hall is telling me how to use it. I can use these grounding and placement cues in a variety of ways to improve the texture of the story.
This is why sound is so important to the feature maker. In crafting radio features, the producer is using sound not only for its everyday, informational qualities-we do not hear a match being struck only to inform us that a cigarette is being lit-but for its metaphoric qualities. These are musical, poetic, or even balletic.
I am not poetic. I think it would be a good idea to try to be. I also like the idea of establishing sound effect themes for subjects in my interviews. It could be a good way to transition clips between multiple voices, but these themes have to be native to the environment we’re recording in or to the life of the speaker, otherwise they will ring false.
Assignment: Identify emotional themes in pieces. Support them with appropriate sound cues.
The key sound metaphor that unlocked the emotional narrative was a rocking chair on a porch, on a summer’s evening, “among the sounds of the night.”
Alan Hall talks about a piece he did on Knoxville, Tennessee. He shows a script with quotes and ambiences and effects. I would like to start making similar sound art pieces that explore the essence of a location through sound. Franklin Ave, Prospect Park, The library, the zoo all are in walking distance and easily accessible. I also think that that exercise would help me to pursue building a personal sound effects library and to begin contributing more to FreeSound.org, a website that has been a great boon to this production.
Assignment: Contribute to FreeSound, when making sound art pieces.
Rather than being merely a platform for delivering information, radio production can be considered an “art” that exists in linear time, occupying a territory that lies somewhere between the concert hall and the cinema.
I get into fights about RadioLab because people hate the sound embellishments and flourishes they pursue. What do I want to do? Report or make art or tell stories? Or all three? Can you do all three? This is something that I’m going to have to keep pondering.
To this day, I believe that holding a magnifying glass-or magnifying microphone-to the most mundane aspect of the everyday will reveal some sort of poetry, some sort of music. Scratch the surface of the street and reveal art. Strike a match and illuminate the human condition.
Randall Munroe says this. Robert Krulwich and Jad Abumrad say this. Planet Earth in HD says this. Everything is fascinating if you zoom in enough.
A more intimate relationship with the subject is possible when there are no barriers, no intermediares, between the story and the listener’s ear.
This is the pervasive manner of telling rather than showing, though I suspect stories are often better served by not placing a reporter between the subject and the listener.
These two lines conflict directly with Ira Glass’ strategy of writing illuminating, presentational intros in order to produce a story. They also conflict with Ira’s suggestion to beginning reporters, that rookie reporters should get themselves on tape talking with and cajoling their subjects. I wonder if Alan Hall’s advice is targeted at more advanced radio producers who have the skills and craftsmanship to present and frame a story without including themselves in the piece, or if we’re talking about two different kinds of radio. Alan Hall throughout this essay focuses on delivering an experience. Ira Glass is caught somewhere between a report and story. I’m starting to understand that telling a story might be easier than delivering an experience. Or at least easier than delivering a meaningful experience. The type of experience Alan Hall is talking about is the compressed essence of a time, place, location, people, and rhythm. A story according to Ira Glass is plot and reflection. To create a compressed experience of the kind that Alan Hall refers to, I would need to master rhythm, pacing, tone, get a ton of field recordings, and shape scripts in accordance with those rhythms instead of in a logical and easy to understand organizational structure. It’s essentially a musical composition of words. Creating experiences may need to be a side project. Generally, though, delivering an experience is something I need to practice, because musical composition is not a skill I’ve developed.
When the clip finished I saw one of the sports producers shrug. “SFW!” she said. I asked what she meant, “SFW?” Her reply opened up for me a chasm between, on the one hand, the world of the imagination–an understanding of the deeper resonances of things–and on the other, the everyday demands and expectations of an information-driven medium: “So Fucking What!”
This quote is another example of what might be an inherent conflict between a story driven radio piece and an experience driven one. I’ve been reading a few more articles in this book and I think I’m going to keep seeing this divide. Am I a reporter, an artist, an archivist? Right now, probably citizen journalist which is code for: kid with a tape recorder. Which of those do I want to be? I’m not sure yet. I know I want to tell stories, more than I want to tell the truth, more than I want to record history. If making an artful composition will help me tell a good story than that’s another tool I need to add to my bag.